Y retumbas en mi alma
Y vibras en mi cuerpo
Y vibras bajo mi falda
Una cómplice caricia
Una cómplice mirada
Un solo sexo de avaricia
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Un suspiro con gemido
Un descanso afanoso
Una huella imborrable
Un aroma adherido
Una experiencia impostergable
Un deseo consabido
Para vos son mis palabras
Para vos es mi ansío
Para vos es la espera
Del corazón mío
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diay si, acá pasando como de rigor. Ma o menos el poemilla.
COSTARRIQUEÑÑA!! :)) Que yo quiero leer y espero poder tenerr tu libro en cu´ñanto lo saquess!! he??!!
a mí me ha encantado este poemaa!!
Transmites toda la pasión en esas palabras tan retumbantess!! Me gustó mucho!!
Y claro...también hay otros que me gustaron más como por ejemplo "Y Contando" y "Espacio Y Tiempo" ;)
BESOOSSS MUUUYY MÁGICOSSS Y UN ABRAZOTE LLENO DE SORPRESASS!!
GRACIAS POR COMPARTIR ESE "MOMENTO" EN MI ESPACIO! :))
¡¡Vaya pasión, muchacha!!
Qué te digo que sea mentira: Voy de vuelta tranquilo, tranquilo, hacia mi punto de partida.
Qué te digo que sea verás: Que me sorprenderás, si me pillas de salida, echando humo, con mis mejillas encendidas y mis orejas, y no por pena, precisamente; con una cierta ansiedad en cada paso... y unas ciertas ganas de; ganas de... ¡agua, por favor, fría!... con unas ciertas ganas de volver.
¡Sabroso leerte! Pero junto a alguien más que te lea…
¡Fffffffffffffffffffffffffff!
póngale música, Podría ser una canción bonita.
Atrevete-te salte del closet.
;)
Desde la epidermis del verso
que acompaña estas palabras,
hoy esos locos querubines
de alas de papel rosa
me acompañan
para colorear tu sonrisa
y regalarte felices instantes
de plácida compañía.
¡FELIZ DÍA DE LA AMISTAD Y DEL AMOR!
literófilo: se le agradece el comentario
corazón coraza: que halago mas grande me has hecho.. seguiré escribiendo entonces... al leerme me entiendes.
warren lee: ups !!! hay buena empatía entonces... agua fría para varios, me incluyo!
julia: la música es tu fuerte.... vos decime y empezamos con los acordes.... jaja
milagros: que los "querubines con alas", nunca nos abandonen,,,,
les deseo un lindo día... besos y abrazos....
vuelvo y vuelvan..
¿Qué quiere decirte Julia con lo de salí del clóset? esa expresión tiene otro contenido, no musical.
ME ENCANTÓ, SIMPLEMENTE ME ENCANTÓ!!!
iluso: que bueno seguirte encantando..
amalia: tenés razón y gracias por tu observación.....
solo que esa frase de la canción, yo la aplico dentro de mi contexto.... dejar salir en mayores proporciones y mediante la escritura, los sentimientos y las sensaciones de lo quiero y de lo que vivo...
de otra forma "salirme del closet", para mi no funciona esa frase en sentido genuino, no tiene sentido, no tiene por qué???.....
saludotes para vos...
Wow!!! esta sorprendente! Me encanto!!
Como te quiero con tanta devoción, bien quisiera que las palabras del poema fueran para mí.
Sé que Paula tiene mucha fuerza para sus "razonamientos" líricos, o sea, en el manejo de lo lírico. Sus escritos son como golpes duros de la inspiración, no sé (parafraseo a César Vallejo). Entonces... ¿por qué este poema, al leerlo, se me va como semilla de guaba?
Cuando Julia le dice que le ponga música, acato sobre qué es lo que no me calza de este poema con respecto al resto de lo que le he leído a Paula.
¡Ajá!, es el carácter machacón de sus estrofas, que riman porque deben rimar: a puro fórceps. Esta es la debilidad de este poema.
Vean: "caricia" con "avaricia", "mirada" con "apilada", etc. Puro fórceps.
Ahí se pierde la espontaneidad lírica y lo propio de las letras de Paula. Esto la lleva a lugares comunes, como "orgasmo lujurioso", "cómplice caricia", "huella imborrable",
"aroma adherido".
En otros textos, Paula ha creado conceptos metafóricos más audaces, creativos e imaginativos. En todo caso, me imagino que Neruda debe tener poesías por ahí que no firmaría de nuevo. Paula, amiga, lee bien de nuevo este poema tuyo: es lo que no debes hacer más, aunque otros te lo elogien en este blog. Mantenlo en tu presencia, cerca, como un mal ejemplo.
gracias william......
de hecho hacer poesía es muy simple, sin embargo esto salió en ese momento
la metáfora no siempre surge y hace días no invade mi cerebro...
entiendo lo que dices y gracias por la recomendación, siempre valiosa e importante para mi, una simple aficionada.
Paula, si te catalogas como una "simple aficionada" te vas a exigir menos. Eres buena al escribir, muy buena, date más relectura antes de publicar y hazlo como lo que eres: con naturaleza fiel para lo que te gusta escribir. Nada de "simple aficionada", nada de autocomplacencias estériles, nada de no hacerlo mejor cada vez, aunque es válido que disfrutes de casa texto escrito, debes difrutarlo, aparte del resultado final. Te quiero, Paula, lo sabes.
gracias william... sé lo que quieres decirme.
dejaré de sustraerme valor,
abrazos
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